mx of nations designed shirts

jbob_1986
Edited Date/Time 9/4/2019 1:58am
what do you guys think?please dont be rude if you dont like it.if any one wants one done or front number boards then please message on here.i do this for a hobby and do not charge as i am learning how to use graphics software so hopefully i will onl;y get better!




when requesting please state colours,brands,surname and number!! This counts for shirt and front number boards
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I see lots of potential upside to getting better in the future.
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mx 219 8/15/2019 10:25am
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I will try not to be too rude, but the numbers, last name, and bubble around numbers looks dumb.

I probably wouldn't have the US flag on the sleeves either, otherwise not too bad. Not particularly my cup of tea with the US flag on the front, but it's okay looking.
jbob_1986 8/15/2019 10:39am
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mx 219 wrote:
I will try not to be too rude, but the numbers, last name, and bubble around numbers looks dumb. I probably wouldn't have the US flag...
I will try not to be too rude, but the numbers, last name, and bubble around numbers looks dumb.

I probably wouldn't have the US flag on the sleeves either, otherwise not too bad. Not particularly my cup of tea with the US flag on the front, but it's okay looking.
Thank you for the feedback
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Jharper 8/15/2019 10:54am
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I honestly don't think your layout is horrible, you just need better design software and some color matching. I took yours and adjusted it a bit.


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Jharper wrote:
I honestly don't think your layout is horrible, you just need better design software and some color matching. I took yours and adjusted it a bit...
I honestly don't think your layout is horrible, you just need better design software and some color matching. I took yours and adjusted it a bit.


I like that!!!!
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OldHalfway 8/15/2019 11:04am
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I'm not sure what software you are using but always avoid "stretching" or "pulling" at any any logo. Cheers.
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AHRMA361 8/15/2019 11:26am
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Bonus: localriders will wash that gear for Free!
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sumdood 8/15/2019 1:11pm
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jbob_1986 wrote:
what do you guys think?please dont be rude if you dont like it.if any one wants one done or front number boards then please message on...
what do you guys think?please dont be rude if you dont like it.if any one wants one done or front number boards then please message on here.i do this for a hobby and do not charge as i am learning how to use graphics software so hopefully i will onl;y get better!




when requesting please state colours,brands,surname and number!! This counts for shirt and front number boards
The flags on the sleeve need to be turned around and facing so the stars will be leading, as it is now the flag will be "flying" backwards. Cool
wideopen198 8/15/2019 2:07pm
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-MAVERICK- wrote:
I thought this was going to be a thread about shirts you can buy to support teams. The Netherlands, Switzerland, and Sweden already have them for...
I thought this was going to be a thread about shirts you can buy to support teams.

The Netherlands, Switzerland, and Sweden already have them for sale.

Netherlands



Switzerland



Sweden


Yeah, too bad the names of the riders on the team aren't even on the TeamNL hoodie. big fail
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-MAVERICK- 8/15/2019 2:18pm
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-MAVERICK- wrote:
I thought this was going to be a thread about shirts you can buy to support teams. The Netherlands, Switzerland, and Sweden already have them for...
I thought this was going to be a thread about shirts you can buy to support teams.

The Netherlands, Switzerland, and Sweden already have them for sale.

Netherlands



Switzerland



Sweden


wideopen198 wrote:
Yeah, too bad the names of the riders on the team aren't even on the TeamNL hoodie. big fail
Could always get it autographed, problem solved.

I get what you're saying though.
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Torco1 wrote:
[img]https://p.vitalmx.com/photos/forums/2019/08/15/366640/s1200_MXDN_Shirt.jpg[/img]

How could I have forgotten to include BL? I’d actually wear this one
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Torco1 wrote:
[img]https://p.vitalmx.com/photos/forums/2019/08/15/366640/s1200_MXDN_Shirt.jpg[/img]

Holy shit that made me bust out laughing. I love it. I'd buy one in a heart beat.
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Torco1 wrote:
[img]https://p.vitalmx.com/photos/forums/2019/08/15/366640/s1200_MXDN_Shirt.jpg[/img]

I would definitely shotgun a Monster in that bro
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I’m an Aussie and I remember buying a cool US ‘82 des nation T shirt by mail. Why US? I think I just wanted to see you guys against the European teams instead of the half arse efforts previously before ‘81.
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Jharper 8/16/2019 5:57am
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jbob_1986 wrote:
what do you guys think?please dont be rude if you dont like it.if any one wants one done or front number boards then please message on...
what do you guys think?please dont be rude if you dont like it.if any one wants one done or front number boards then please message on here.i do this for a hobby and do not charge as i am learning how to use graphics software so hopefully i will onl;y get better!




when requesting please state colours,brands,surname and number!! This counts for shirt and front number boards
Maybe Try posting a front number plate for Anderson? My suggestion would be to only use free vector art if you're going to clip stuff in and use bold sans serif fonts that match. The font you used for 13 and Anderson looks "cowboy" esque, which reminds me of Tomac, but not JA13. Also, Color matching goes a long way. All the blues and reds should be the same. It will help the look.

I know we all picked on you, myself included, but you will get better the more you do it. Try tastytuts on youtube for a strong base knowledge of ai. Which I assume you are using. I taught myself for box design at work and I'm still learning daily now 7 years laters. Good Luck!
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Falcon 8/16/2019 8:58am
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More constructive criticism: use more white in a Red/White/Blue American format.
Keep working at it and the designs will only get better.
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-MAVERICK- 9/3/2019 7:39pm
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-MAVERICK- wrote:
I thought this was going to be a thread about shirts you can buy to support teams. The Netherlands, Switzerland, and Sweden already have them for...
I thought this was going to be a thread about shirts you can buy to support teams.

The Netherlands, Switzerland, and Sweden already have them for sale.

Netherlands



Switzerland



Sweden


wideopen198 wrote:
Yeah, too bad the names of the riders on the team aren't even on the TeamNL hoodie. big fail
Came across these.

Buy HERE.


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